Thursday, January 12, 2006

The moments
between sleep and wakefullness
are Yours

Resting quietly
beneath my eyelids
You gaze long into my soul

4 Comments:

Blogger maverick said...

"the gaze touches ur soul and comes back to me, again and again ... like an echo ... i gave my heart and soul to 'it' ... did I lose my soul to u ?" ...

hey couldn't help extending ur lines ... touching stuff ... a lot of things unsaid ...

10:38 pm  
Blogger Rustling_Leaves said...

Hey Rambler, feel free to extend the lines; yes, it does leave a lot of things unsaid. These are opening lines from a poem I wrote last Nov on a friend's latop but forgot to take down on paper. As luck would have it, my friend sold the laptop soon after!

I tried recalling the poem but was unable to, so, i think i'll just have to start again (or finish it rather) with new(er) thoughts.

1:42 am  
Blogger maverick said...

too bad, that u lost the poem .... but ... i am optimistic , new lines will ooze out ... anyways ur blog has been missing ur other poems .... jot 'em here ....

1:29 pm  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Beautiful ....and beyond words !! loved it absolutely :)

2:41 pm  

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