The moments
between sleep and wakefullness
are Yours
Resting quietly
beneath my eyelids
You gaze long into my soul
between sleep and wakefullness
are Yours
Resting quietly
beneath my eyelids
You gaze long into my soul
posted by Rustling_Leaves at 2:18 am
4 Comments:
"the gaze touches ur soul and comes back to me, again and again ... like an echo ... i gave my heart and soul to 'it' ... did I lose my soul to u ?" ...
hey couldn't help extending ur lines ... touching stuff ... a lot of things unsaid ...
Hey Rambler, feel free to extend the lines; yes, it does leave a lot of things unsaid. These are opening lines from a poem I wrote last Nov on a friend's latop but forgot to take down on paper. As luck would have it, my friend sold the laptop soon after!
I tried recalling the poem but was unable to, so, i think i'll just have to start again (or finish it rather) with new(er) thoughts.
too bad, that u lost the poem .... but ... i am optimistic , new lines will ooze out ... anyways ur blog has been missing ur other poems .... jot 'em here ....
Beautiful ....and beyond words !! loved it absolutely :)
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